Like we didn't all see that coming...
As soon as I heard the 'Hello Dana' I knew she was going to die, probably in a 'random' and gory way. Then the razor blade...
Death is too popular nowadays, it's not random or shocking. Perhaps if you had played some sweet children's music in the backround while her blood seeped slowly from her veins and the man's voice was saying something along the lines of "I do so love to watch children bleed out" It might have been somewhat interesting.