Like we didn't all see that coming...
As soon as I heard the 'Hello Dana' I knew she was going to die, probably in a 'random' and gory way. Then the razor blade...
Death is too popular nowadays, it's not random or shocking. Perhaps if you had played some sweet children's music in the backround while her blood seeped slowly from her veins and the man's voice was saying something along the lines of "I do so love to watch children bleed out" It might have been somewhat interesting.
i can imagine the creepiest grin when you say that
Let down by its lack of pace
All in all, I didnt find it very entertaining, but this isnt to say parts of it were amusing, or could be if it just had more PACE.
The sprites were well handled, although you missed out on things like any sort of expression (when the cow was killed, when he saw the other cow... etc) which could have made it more watchable.
Pace and comical timing let this down heavily. The dialogue was comic and quite humourous, but some sentances took such a long time, with nothing else going on in the screen, that I lost interest half way through. To be sutible for the MTV generation, and to be a good short funny thing, it needs to keep the humour going, or maintain tension.
It does look very promising though, I liked the voice acting for the most part, and with your animation skills are good enough that you could make something really worth watching in future, dont be disheartened! (After all, this got on the front page)
It was amusing and attention grabbing without being crude or bloody, which isn't that easy. The characters were cool, the part with the dragon made of... post-it notes (?) was awesome and the music was used to good effect.
It gets a straight 5
lol I think you were trying to review something else. I've done that though. A dragon made of post-it notes??? Sweet! ;)
Very funny. Very good. Very... five out of five.
The best animation ever to grace flash.
I NEED the .swf just to see how he managed it...
Oooooh its so good it hurts.... hurts like being loved to death by sexy women...
Really well done. The only way it could really get better would be to make the rockin' bit even more rockin'.
But still a triumph of creativity and humor.
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